I got some good advice from visitors that I applied to this little sketch and this is the result.
6″ x 8″ oil on canvas
What did I change? I moved the bottom of the bridge so that it didn’t align with the roof line of the building (thanks Frank) and intensified some of the values as it was pretty much all mid tone before (thanks Ujwala).
I tweaked a few other things to help distinguish between objects and probably got a better photo this time than last.
I always see something else I want to fix after I post it so I may play with it a bit more but I’m getting tired of looking at it now so I’m more likely to toss it in the drawer and move on to something else.
I appreciate the feedback both positive and critical and I think this one turned out better as a result.