I really didn’t like that last image I posted. I’ve worked a bit more on the painting and this is what it looks like now. It’s still on the easel but I didn’t want to leave the old image here.
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I can’t put a finger on why, but I find this painting especially moving. Thanks for sharing it, Bill.
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It is really coming along, maybe just a bit of detail?
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Far better than the other one. It will be difficult to add detail and not spoil the overall effect.
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